ELA story part 2

(this story is not part of the ELA story because this is a regular blog story...)
When Dan and Marina got married there baby was born. Ziliang was so happy for them that he wanted to find a girl freind him self but he dare ask Jenny out. Dan was wondering what would Ziliang do if she had to leave him. He was wondering. Then Dan got and idea. He was going to ask Jenny out (tis part is said in part 1 but I didn't finish if it wasn't in the 1st part then now you know)to see if Ziliang really wanted to go out with her. When Dan got there something bad happened. Jenny house was on fire. Dan call the F.D.N.Y. When they got here the fire was going to fast. Ziliang came and tried to go in and save Jenny, but the fire was to strong. Ziliang didn't want Jeny to die. There was a surprising thing. Jenny came back and saw Ziliang on the floor. Ziliang was begging that if Jenny was alive he would switch his life was hers. Jenny heard that and was so happy, but she was crying. Ziliang turned around and saw Jenny. They started to ran toward each other and huged eat other. Thats how part 2 ends