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Friday, November 14, 2008

About 3 teenagers in love

When Dan came out of college, it was a sunny day. He was looking for a job. He found a job and got hired. He got new friends and was able to fid 1 friend name Ziliang. Dan finds his 1st love Marina. When Marina saw Dan she had a weird feeling that she would like this teenager. Later on the weeks Dan and Marina be going out to talk. They feel in love with each other. Dan didn’t know that Ziliang his friend likes Marina also. So one day Ziliang ask Dan to come out and talk with me about Marina’s personal things. When Dan got outside to talk to Zliang in personal about Marina’s personal things, Ziliang started to hit Dan for no reason. Ziliang told Dan that he likes Marina and you took her away fro me you little brat. When Dan heard that Ziliang likes Marina he said” When I saw Marina I loved her” If you want to know if Marina really likes you hen I’ll go ask her. Later on the day Ziliang and Dan went to Marina’s house to talk to her. “What happened to you Dan” said Marina. Nothing, I got hit by some kids. When Dan asked Marina who she likes with Ailing next to him ,Marina answered that I like you Dan, why you asking though? Some one wants to know who you like. Ziliang got heart broken because she heard the words that Marina said. Then Ailing got up and started to hit Dan because Marina likes him instead of me. Later cops came to stop the fight. They said what happened here? Marina told them that Dan and her was in a relationship as boyfriend and girlfriend. “What about him” the cops asked? This boy is Ziliang, a boy who had a crush on me . “So why they fighting?” said the cops. I said that I like this Boy Dan and not this boy Ziliang. So when Ziliang heard that I don’t like him he started to hit Dan. So the cops got the problemed solved and let go both Dan and Ziliang.


After a few days Dan got better. One day Ziliang called Marina if what she said was true. Marina its me Ziliang, I want to know if you really don’t like me? “The last time i said to you” I don’t like you” That’s what I said the past few days” but I really like you so please don’t leave me, sorry Ziliang I cant force myself to like you. Ziliang was sad about the words that came out of Marinas month. The next day Zilinag wasn’t paying any attention to his job, boss, allies, and friends to forget about her. Later on the weakens. Dan and Marina was happy that Ziiang would leave them alone. They didn’t really care if everyone including Ziliang didn’t want to be together. Dan got a call from his sister Jacklin. “Hello” said Dan. This is us the kidnappers that want money from you people. Why you want money from us you little brat. Dan hung up. The kidnappers called again. Dan asked what they want? Later the kidnappers put Jacklin on the phone. “Jacklin you alright” said Dan? “I’m fine with these people because they feeding me and giving me the cloths I want and they don’t really want me to look at there faces. You heard her voice right Mister? Yes I did so what you want from me and how much money you want from me or my family?! We want 2million dollars in cash by the end of this weak. How am I suppose to get that much money by the end of this weak. There are only 2 days left. I don’t care how you get the money I want eh money by the end of this weak, if you don’t give it to me your sister dies!. Dddddddddd. Dan told his parents that Jacklin got kidnapped and he also told Jack that his sister got kdnapped . He wanted help from Jack because he has been in the police station or been a cop for 8 years( he is older that Dan by 2 years, but he was in high school when he meet him.)The end in this weak Dan gave in the money ,but he got a call from Jack. Jack told him that he found his sister. “Dan I found your sister” said jack. Where is she? She is inside a hou…... “WHAT YOU DOING YOU LITTLE BRAT!!!!!!!!!!!!” JACK, JACK. JACK ANSWER ME! JACK!!!!!! When Jack hung up Dan was worried about him. Dan went to the place that he got the call from, he couldn’t find it because the call was from Jack’s cell phone. Then Dan heard a bang sound. The sound was coming from the right of him. He followed the sound and found a house that is ruined in a long time. Dan saw it was Jacklin and Jack. Jack was on the floor because he got shot for saving his sister. They went on the ambulance to go to the hospital.


One day Dan was drunk and can’t drive. So that day Marina went home with Dan so he could sleep. The time that they were together was 3:00 o clock am. Later when Marina came to see if Dan was awake, but instead of Dan waking up something terrible happened. The next day Dan and Marina woke up on same bed. I don’t want to say what happened because you know what happens when one of them is drunk …… now back to the story when Marina and Dan woke up they were saying what happened? Marina told him that you went drunk yesterday and you pulled me toward you and we……. Aw f(a curse word)I shouldn’t have drank that much bear. So Dan left because he didn’t want anyone know and Ziliang. You know what happened when Marina said “I don’t like you” Ziliang hit Dan for stealing his love. If Ziliang knows this then he might kill Dan. about you and Dan. “Why you being so nice to Dan?” said Marinas parents? “I’m being nice to him because …. I don’t want to tell you. “ “you have to tell us . “ “Ok” dad and mom.” The reason why I’m helping Dan is because that he’s going to be my husband. WAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! “Ok, I’m telling Dan’s parents that you and Dan are going to marry each other,” said Marinas parents. “No , dad and mom, don’t tell his parents.” “Why don’t you want him to know that you and him had ***? I don’t want anyone to know including Ziliang. “Why” said Marinas parents? If Ziliang knows about this he’ll kill Dan. Last time I told him that I don’t like him and I like Dan, Ziliang hit me in the b***s and that hurt like crazy.


One day Dan and Marina went out for a talk. They were talking about what he would do to take care of her. When Marina got to that point Dan can’t tell her. The other day when Dan and Marina went outside to go on a date, Jacklin saw them going out and hid. Later on the day( the same day) when Dan went with Marina house Jacklin called. “Brother were are you?” said Jacklin. Um…. I’m at the store with Marina. “Ok” then I’ll see you when you get home. Marina got in the house Dan left but Dan called out her name, Marina went close to Dan and you people know what happens, Dan left and Marina went inside the house . When Marina went inside the house she was blushing. The day after Marina got called outside with Dan and Ziliang. Dan wanted to tell Ziliang something about Marina with Marina next to her. When Marina got here Dan needed to tell Ziliang something that happened with them. Dan told Ziliang that he and Marina had the problem that only grown ups do when they get married that night. Ziliang was happy for them. Dan and Marina didn’t know what happened to Ziliang. Dan asked Ziliang that if he liked another girl beside her? Ziliang answered that he like Jenny but Jenny don’t like me. Dan told Ziliang that he would help him on this. The next day Jenny got robbed and Ziliang help Jenny chase the robber. Ziliang caught the robber, and gave back the purse or the things the robber took from her back to her. Jenny thanked Ziliang and gave him a (what growns up do when they like each other) Ziliang was still. One day Jenny and Ziliang was asked to go outside to have a talk with Dan and Marina. The truth wasn’t going outside for a talk, he wanted to get Ziliang and Jenny together. That day it was raining. Dan and Marina stayed in one tent and Jenny and Ziliang stayed in the other. That day Ziliang and Jenny lost there mind in the tent. They did the same thing that Dan and Marina did in the bed.


The main thing of this story is that Dan has no money to marry Marina. One day Dan had a special guest. The special guest was his friend Thomas and his girlfriend Tiffany. Thomas wanted his car fixed in a month because they were going on a honey moon after there marriage. Dan said “How would you want your car fixed?” Thomas wanted his car fixed with important parts of the store. He would pay 28 million dollars in cash when he finished. Dan was happy. Thomas knew that Dan and Maria was getting married so he would pay 2million dollars in cash when he was done. Dan was working on it right away. The past days Dan didn’t go see Marina because he was busy doing the job. One day Thomas came to the store to check out his car. Thomas came to tell Dan that he wants him to fix the car a little faster because he was going to marry Tiffany soon. Dan said “why?” Thomas said “ We changed the marrige date so you have to fix the car a little faster” “When is the date” said Dan? “The day is the 26th of November” said Thomas. Ok I’ll do this night and day, now you won’t worry about it?


Finally Dan was done fixing Thomas’s car. He took a truck and put the car inside the truck. When he was on the way to Thoams’s house he had a car accident. People came and took a look to see what happened. Marina got a call from the hospital that Dan had a crash. The crash was the worst. Marina heard the car and fainted. They called the police because Marina fainted. They were wondering why Marina fainted? The other day when Dan and Marina had an accident Ziliang was worried about them two. The next day Marina woke up. When she woke up she wanted to know if Dan is ok or if he woke up. Marina was so worried about Dan that she was going to faint again. The doctor came to tell the reason why there daughter fainted. The doctor said that Marina was pregnant. Everyone was shocked because they never new there daughter and Dan had a problem like that. The next day Marina went to the doctor to check if the baby was a male or female.


Dan finally woke up. Marina was so happy that she was going to faint again . That day Dan had to stay in the hospital. When Dan got of the hospital, he was doing his job. Marina didn’t see him for the past few days. When Marina went out of the hospital Dan wasn’t there. The past few days in November was boring. Dan finally appeared at the hospital, but Marina was out of the hospital. Dan knew where to find her. One day Marina was out for a walk, Dan saw her. Dan asked if Marina wanted to marry him. Marina said “yes” The day that Thomas got married Dan and Marina got married. Then Ziliang came to the wedding party to celebrate there marrige.

1 comments:

lahana said...

wow, that's quite an epic! i'm glad everything worked out for dan and marina. will there be a part 2? maybe in part 2 we can find out what their baby is like and if ziliang ever finds a girlfriend?